Thursday, July 24, 2008

Humorous Writing sample-Tyler

Tyler loves to do humorous creative writing. Here is a sample from one of his stories (4th grade).


“Wake up Jason! Today they are starting to build the house!” said Jason’s sister Amy.

Jason and Amy are ants… uh, yeah, talking, ants. And they have a huge ant family of two hundred eighty s-. Um, I was going to say 287 but a few of the ants just got stepped on. So now there are 284 ants.

You are probably thinking who’s gonna plan the funeral, and stuff like that. Well, just in case you MIGHT NOT BE AN ANT! The ant family has relatives die every day. Actually about twenty to thirty ants die a day. It’s normal, not that they don’t care about the ants, it’s just that they don’t have the time for funerals and stuff like that. But yes, they do get sad… of course.

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